Today we received feedback for our initial rough draft of our news package. Here is some of things we will be changing to improve the quality of our piece.
1) Put statistics together - Right now we have edited the statistics randomly so they appear throughout rather than in a formulated structure.
2) Have the regular theme being accidents - Right now our news package is based on a general theme of young drivers. We need to be more specific and make our footage more relevant to one theme that we chose to be accidents by young drivers.
3) Stabilise the Vox Pop - Right now our footage is very shaky so we thought to use iMovie to stabilise the footage making appear to be more professional.
4) One question with cutaways to several answers - We have had various Vox Pops with different types of questions. However, to receive more marks we plan to ask several people the same range of questions and edit the footage so the answers come out one after the other.
5) Film moving traffic before the news presenter starts talking about busy roads - Before the news presenter starts speaking we have filmed a road of parked cars. It does not make sense to what she is saying therefore, we will films some cutaways to moving traffic.
6) Film Vox Pops in more crowded places - We have filmed every Vox Pop in quite secluded areas. To expand the variety of Vox Pops and make it look like we have stopped strangers in public we will film some more in crowded places.
7) Get footage of driving instructor and learner car - As you can see our Vox Pops have all been filmed with young drivers, however, it would be relevant to film someone with experience and would break up our news package as well. We want the learner car as the cars we have filmed are not fully relevant to our niche news topic that is advice for young drivers. So, Ria will film her instructor and car during one of her lessons.
- Sophia and Ria